Good job on your storyboard so far! Its very easy to read and clear! and good job leaving everyone on a cliff hanger there! :D
My only comment would be the scene right after the fade out, I notice you flipped the camera and the gater is not facing the camera, i think it would be better if you opened the scene like a close up of the gaters' face waking up, and then noticing that the cat's missing. This way you dont have to worry about jumping the line and totally flipping the whole shot!
overall its an amazing story and im excited to see the rest!
This is so adorable! It's great how you play with the idea of an alligator interacting with a kitten. However, like what Khen mentioned, the line is jumped during the fade out and fade in. Correcting this would also give the audience a better chance to see that the kitten is missing. Other than that, you're off to a great start! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Hello Kelsey!
ReplyDeleteGood job on your storyboard so far! Its very easy to read and clear! and good job leaving everyone on a cliff hanger there! :D
My only comment would be the scene right after the fade out, I notice you flipped the camera and the gater is not facing the camera, i think it would be better if you opened the scene like a close up of the gaters' face waking up, and then noticing that the cat's missing. This way you dont have to worry about jumping the line and totally flipping the whole shot!
overall its an amazing story and im excited to see the rest!
This is so adorable! It's great how you play with the idea of an alligator interacting with a kitten. However, like what Khen mentioned, the line is jumped during the fade out and fade in. Correcting this would also give the audience a better chance to see that the kitten is missing. Other than that, you're off to a great start! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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